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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "When it comes to success, there are no sho

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "When it comes to success, there are no sho

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "When it comes to success, there are no shortcuts. " You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案 There Is No Shortcut to Success [1] There are many ways to success, such as a strong will, an intelligent mind or long lasting passions. Whichever way one take, one will find [2] the truth that there are no shortcuts on the way to success. [3] Just as the saying goes, "No pains, no gains." Success can only be achieved by those who are working hard and have great perseverance and enthusiasm. [4] Firstly, without [6] exerting oneself, one could never expect to achieve success. Although having been equipped with outstanding skills, [5] Wang Hao, the famous player of table tennis always trains hard for every championship. [4] Secondly, perseverance is one of the prerequisites to one’s success. In the British Museum, with his unremitting perseverance of almost forty years, [5] Karl Marx has been searching for materials incessantly and finally accomplished his world-known masterpiece [6] Das Kapital. [4] Thirdly, the enthusiasm for work is also indispensable. [5] Albert Einstein once said, "Enthusiasm is the best teacher for things and it is far more important than responsibility." [7] Rome wasn’t built in a day. The journey to success is full of [6] ups and downs. [8] The shortest way to success is to [6] work our ass off with great perseverance and passions.
解析 [1]指出成功路很多，引出话题
[2]结合题目引语
[3]引用谚语，引入主题，统领下文的论述
[4]分别论述成功的三条途径
[5]分别以王皓奋斗、马克思著书、爱因斯坦名言为例，论证更充分有力
[6]亮点词汇：exerting oneself“奋发努力”：Das Kapital，“《资本论》”；ups and downs“盛衰，沉浮”；work our ass off“拼尽全力做某事.
[7]引用俗语“冰冻三尺非一日之寒”总结全文
[8]呼应主题
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