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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Self-Drive Tourism. You should write

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Self-Drive Tourism. You should write

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Self-Drive Tourism. You should write at least 120 words .following the outline given below:
    1．随着私家车越来越多，人们开始选择自驾游的方式外出旅行
    2．自驾游的利与弊
    3．我的观点
                        The Popularity of Self-Drive Tourism
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答案 The Popularity of Self-Drive Tourism ①With the rapid economic development, more and more Chinese households own private cam Self-drive tourism has gained popularity among those private car owners. ②There are many advantages of self-drive tourism. Firstly, self-drive tourists can enjoy the full freedom of itinerary. They are free to choose the destination and the departure time according to their own schedule instead of hurrying after the guide from one place to another. Secondly, tourists in their own cars feel more comfortable and convenient because they can avoid the jostling crowd and save the trouble of booking tickets for an outing. ③However, self-drive tourism has disadvantages too, such as the driver may be not familiar with the route, and driving itself sometimes is a little tiring. ④As for me, I prefer self-drive tourism because this way of traveling is more challenging and gives me more pleasures of sightseeing.
解析     ①审题及布局。作为一篇论说文。此题是一篇提纲式作文，要求首先对题目所给出的现象进行总的阐述，然后说明这一现象所带来的利与弊，最后表明自己的观点。在布局上，按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。第一段指出随着私家车越来越多，人们开始选择自驾游的方式外出旅行；第二段分别论述自驾游的利与弊，根据自己可能持有的观点，事先权衡一下罗列出来的利和弊的多少，即如果支持自驾游，就应该多说几点好处，弊端随笔带过即可，反之亦然；第三段说明自己的观点。②语言。语言表达要准确，句式要多样，条理要清楚，富有逻辑性，词汇要丰富，这样可以增添文采。就时态而言，因为多为讲述现在事实，采用一般现在时即可。
    ①开门见山，指出随着私家车越来越多，人们开始越来越多地选择自驾游的方式外出旅行。其中，households“家庭”，gain popularity“变得流行”属于高分表达，增添了文采。
    ②直接说明白驾游的好处。这一部分的结构为：“There are many advantages of…Firstly…Secondly…”。enjoy the full freedom“享有完全的自由”，itinerary“旅游路线”，hurry after“匆忙追赶”，jostling crowd“拥挤的人群”，save the trouble of“免去……的麻烦”，这些都是高分表达。
    ③由“however”转折导出自驾游的弊端，并用“such as”结构导出具体的弊端，避免了重复使用同一结构。
    ④明确表明自己的观点。challenging“富有挑战性”和pleasures of sightseeing“旅游的乐趣”为高分表达，增添了文采。
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