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  3. Knowing the Problems Is Not Enough Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) de

Knowing the Problems Is Not Enough Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) de

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问题     Knowing the Problems Is Not Enough
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   
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答案 In the picture, an official is holding a brush pen and writing two Chinese characters meaning "read" on a stone. The stone is the representation of a problem and more similar stones with the same Chinese characters are behind the official. This picture seems to urge officials to do something about the problems found, for knowing the problems is far from enough, and taking action to address them is more important. In my opinion, procrastination among some officials could be eradicated by a performance-based evaluation scheme. To be exact, officials’ salary and promotion should be directly linked to how well they have responded to the problems exposed by citizens and the media. If they turn a blind eye to the problems and take no action, they should be removed from office. If, on the other hand, they tackle the problems effectively, they would be favorably considered when there is a promotion offer. They could also be financially rewarded if the measures they take have been proven successful and powerful. In conclusion, to urge officials to both know and solve the problems, a reform in salary and promotion scheme need to be launched.
解析     这幅图片刻画了一名官员拿着毛笔在各个问题上批了“已阅”二字。从图解看出，该图认为只知道存在问题是不够的，还需要拿出具体的解决方案。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：
    第一段描绘图片，指出只知道存在问题是不够的，官员应采取行动解决问题。
    第二段提出个人看法：官员拖延处理问题的陋习可通过绩效考核机制来解决。其一，官员的晋升和工资应该与其解决问题的能力挂钩。其二，如果官员的解决方案既有效又及时，可以给予一定的奖励。
    第三段总结全文：通过改革工资和晋升、任免机制来敦促官员有效解决问题。
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