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Read carefully the following excerpt on the popularity of online instruction across China and then write your response in NO LES

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on the popularity of online instruction across China and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    . summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    . comment on why online education is becoming so popular. You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                Online Instruction Grows in Popularity
    Zheng Anke, who earns up to 3.6 million yuan annually through her English classes on WeChat, China’s most popular instant messaging app, provides a case in point.
    Zheng, in her early 30s, organized 10 WeChat groups with 120 students each and charges each student 3 000 yuan a year. She once worked for New Oriental Education, China’s biggest English-training school, but now runs her own business.
    "I compile my own English learning materials which I send to the students every week," said Zheng, who has two assistants to help her keep in touch with all of the students as they also receive weekly feedback on their pronunciation.
    After-school instruction has long been popular among parents with big hopes for their children’s academic achievements, so the growing popularity of online teaching is not surprising.
    High earnings have caught the public’s attention. One screenshot, which went viral on WeChat, drawing netizen criticism, showed a physics teacher who charged each of his 2 617 students 9 yuan for a single class. He earned 18 842 yuan for an hour’s instruction after sharing 20 percent of the tuition with an online educational agency.
    Yang Jie, a government worker in Jiangsu Province, said distance learning has many advantages compared with traditional educational agencies, including cheaper fees, repeated opportunities to review the teachers’ instruction and the ability to attend classes when it’s convenient.
    Yang also appreciated the ability to choose instructors. "I can choose the teachers I like freely on the Internet," Yang said. "I’ll continue to attend their classes if they turn out to be humorous and their classes are well prepared. "
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答案 Traditional Classroom Learning or Online Learning? Recently, several teachers have succeeded in raking in huge profits by organizing online classes which, with their obvious advantages such as the convenience for learners and cheaper tuition fees, cater to the call for after-school instruction. While their high earnings have provoked fierce criticism from some of the conservative public, I fully support this up-to-date online education for two main reasons. Firstly, online education is student-friendly in its both inexpensive and convenient way of service. Compared with the traditional class whose tuition fees can soar to 200 yuan for a single tutoring class, one online class charges much lower instead. Furthermore, course applicants can attend classes at any fragmented time, at any accessible place and study at their own pace. Secondly, online education is teacher-friendly. While the traditional curriculum has a stodgy control over teachers’ choice of textbooks and teaching contents, teachers of online education can either choose and compile teaching materials according to students’ needs in avoidance of uniformity from "streamlined education", or try innovative teaching ways. Sometimes they can even introduce a few gimmicks to attract students, which is totally denied in the traditional classrooms. More encouragingly, teachers who are well-acclaimed for their mastery of teaching can earn a decent salary in return for their efforts. To sum up, online education not only costs cheaper tuition fees and brings better education for students, but also provides more freedom and a richer life for teachers. There is no doubt that the new form of education will continue to benefit both teachers and students.
解析     本题讨论的是在线教育越来越受欢迎这一话题。选段中以一位英语老师的微信授课为例，说明了网上教学的流行现状；然后分析了其走红的原因以及与传统教学相比所具有的优势。本题的写作重点在于：首先概括上述选段的要点，其次就网络教育流行的原因进行分析论述，最后总结全文。
    开头部分首先以几位老师网上授课走红的例子引出话题，然后结合材料概括网络教学的优势，最后提出自己的观点：赞同这种新型的线上教学模式。
    中间部分从两个方面指出在线教育的优势所在。首先网络教学有利于学生的学习。这一点从降低学费和为学生提供便利两方面展开论述。其次，网络教学有利于老师的工作。这一点也通过两方面展开：老师可以根据学生的需求选择教材以及教学方法；老师通过出色的教学被认可，可以提高自己的收入。
    结尾部分首先总结上述两个分论点，然后重申主题，自然结尾。
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