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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an application letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 1

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an application letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 1

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an application letter. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese.
    假设你是李明，化学系的一名大二学生。请你就申请助学贷款一事给学校有关部门写封申请信。
    申请信的内容包括以下几点：
    1．提出申请
    2．申请的理由
    3．恳请批准
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答案 An Application Letter To whom it may concern, I’m writing to apply for a student loan. As a sophomore from the Chemistry Department, I have much financial difficulty in continuing my study. My father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering illness for many years. My younger brother is now studying in a high school. To support the study of my brother and me, my family has witnessed a sharp increase in the debt to an unbearable amount of ￥130 000 in the past two years. I took part-time jobs during the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for a student loan. If my request is granted, I will make good use of the money and put my mind to study. I will definitely pay back the loan according to the requirements. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
解析     文章第一段开门见山，向有关部门提出贷款申请，同时简要说明申请的原因是家境困难。
    第二段具体阐述申请的理由，分析了家庭的收支情况，给读信的人真实可信的印象。本段中的货币符号和数字很容易吸引阅卷老师的眼球，同时witness，a sharp increase，an unbearableamount of等闪光词及短语的使用，无疑增加了文章的得分点。
    第三段表明自己会充分利用贷款以及按照要求偿还贷款的决心。
    第四段为客套语，以示礼貌。
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