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  3. Independent Writing Directions For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, expl

Independent Writing Directions For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, expl

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                  Independent Writing Directions
    For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your opinion on an issue. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay.
    Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of your essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.
    If you finish your essay before time is up, you may Clink on Next to end this section.
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    Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
    Question:
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
    The government should control the amount of violence in films and TV programs in order to reduce violent crimes in society.
    Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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答案 It is widely acknowledged that the amount of violence in films and TV programs is one of the direct causes that lead to the high crime rate in our society. The voice demanding that the government control violent scenes in the media has been much louder than ever before. Personally, I totally agree with this voice, for it is one of the most effective ways to reduce violent crimes in this world. First and foremost, violence in films or TV programs is often portrayed as vividly as possible in order to attract audiences. This will definitely set a bad example for those immature audiences, who, lacking correct parental guidance, are most likely to copy the violent behavior and commit real violent crimes. Next, the media, such as TV or film, are considered as the correct information sources regulated by the government. It should report and reflect a true picture of the society. Violence, as one of the facts in the real world, certainly has to be reported. However, excessive exposure to violence by the audience is offering misleading information to them, which will exert detrimental influence on society, especially on the young. For example, teenagers will regard those killers and murderers in films and TV programs as heroes and follow their examples. It has been reported recently in the news that a seventeen-year-old killed all his family members, one sister and two parents out of hatred and jealousy. In the real world, we are often reminded of the harm and hurt that violence in the fictional world has brought to us. In a word, our society is now preoccupied by violent scenes and plots. What the government has to do immediately is to take effective measures to control the amount of violence in the media. Only in this way can our society enjoy a high level of security and peace.
解析     文章开头开门见山，指出在影视节目中存在大量暴力镜头，并导致一些社会犯罪行为。随后表明自己的观点：支持政府来控制影视节目中暴力镜头的数量，有效遏制社会中的犯罪行为。
    然后，作者从正反两个角度进行论证。媒体应是政府调节下传播信息的正规渠道，报道和反映社会现实。然而，影视节目为吸引观众，极力渲染暴力，为未成年人提供反面榜样，在社会上造成恶劣影响。作者还通过举例来说明这一恶劣影响。
    最后，作者再次重申暴力充斥当今影视节目，政府应采取强有力的措施加以控制，我们的社会 才能长治久安。
    全文观点鲜明，层次分明，语言娴熟，用词准确，论证深入，论据翔实，结尾有力。
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