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While you were away from home on business a few days ago, your father fell into a coma. Your neighbor Mary stopped a car and bro

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问题     While you were away from home on business a few days ago, your father fell into a coma. Your neighbor Mary stopped a car and brought your father to the hospital and she served him all the time till he recovered.
    1. Write a letter to her to show your gratitude in about 100 words.
    2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use"Zhang Wei"instead.
    3. Do not write the address.
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答案 Dear Mary, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your taking my sick father to hospital and caring for him while I was away on business. It often happens that old people unexpectedly faint away and pedestrians just turn a blind eye to them. However, it is lucky of my father to have you around when he fell into a coma. I cannot imagine what would have happened if you had not been there. No wonder my father speaks highly of you whenever your name is mentioned. My family is gready indebted to you for your loving attention paid to a helpless old man. Please accept my thanks again. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
解析     感谢信的行文思路与大多数信函写作相同：表明目的(致谢)——说明缘由——再次点题(感谢)。指令要求中已将感谢的对象和致谢的原因交代清楚，因此，本篇行文思路清晰可见。此外，致谢原因中提到了老人“fell into a coma”这一情景，不禁使我们联想到近来的社会热点话题——路遇摔倒老人，扶不扶?不妨将此话题融入写作中，以体现邻居Mary善良热心的品行。如此一来，在引起读者共鸣的同时也使文章颇具深意。
    第一段：开门见山，表达感谢。说明感谢的原因(概述事由经过)和自己写信的目的。
    第二段：细述缘由，诚挚赞扬。可联系生活实例，通过对比反衬出邻居善良热心的品行。
    第三段：简单总结，再次致谢。一段表达了自己对邻居的感谢，本段可更进一步地表达全家人对她的谢意。
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