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  3. Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe students should have several short

Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe students should have several short

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问题     Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which view point do you agree with? Write all essay of 400 words on the following topic:
                                   Long or Short Vacations?
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instruction may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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答案 Long or Short Vacations? Students all over the world work hard in school terms. It is no wonder that we jump at the idea of holiday. Have you ever considered having one long vacation of three months? For me, it would be a terrific idea! I think one long vacation is much better than several short ones because it helps students with their study, their health as well as their understanding of society. The first reason to account my preference of one long vacation is that it can broaden students’ learning. In the long vacation, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesses and further develop strengths. As an English major, I have always wanted to read some masterpieces by Shakespeare, by Johnson and by Hemingway, but unfortunately, I can not find adequate time during the terms and short vacations. I even dream of going to English-speaking countries to feel western cultures that can never be found in books. One long vacation provides the time and conveniences, but short vacations do not. The second reason is that one long vacation can do more good to our physical and spiritual health than short ones. The exam-orientated education has driven some of us crazy. Thanks to the long holidays, students who study under great pressure can have this good opportunity to take a deep breath, get away from the heavy study-load and enjoy the flesh air. In addition, the long holidays also provide people with a golden chance in which they can get together with their family members, making up the relationship that may be neglected in those busy days. After a long relaxation, we will become more vigorous and do our work better. Furthermore, one long vacation serves better than short vacations to render students the opportunity to learn more about the society. During the long holiday, we can take part-time jobs with which we can earn money to buy something we long for and gain experience that is essential for the future work; we can help parents with the farm work to relieve their burden; we can travel around the country or the world to open up our eye-reach; or we can simply indulge ourselves in the world of books. The holiday experience makes us more mature and appreciate our schooling better. It must be realized that if the long vacation is not properly managed, it probably is a waste of time for some students. But considering the benefits, I strongly suggest that we should be given one long vacation, as long as we better plan it in order to make use of it in a healthy way to the fullest.
解析     本文开篇用设问句点明主题．亮出作者的观点，并用一句话概括了长假期有利于学生的学习，有利于他们的心理和身体健康，更可以帮助他们了解社会。观点鲜明，思路清晰。
    中间部分从三个方面对比长、短假展开论述。首先，作者用个人经历论证长假期可以补足课堂教学的不足，有足够的时间来学习自己喜欢的东西，因而使学业获益。其次，一方面，长假期既可以缓解学生学习的压力和紧张，又可以使学生有时间和家人团聚，使学生的身心得到休息。再次，学生可以利用长假期做许多有意义的事，从而变得更加成熟，更加珍惜学习生活。第四段中四个we can...并列句的使用显得气势磅礴，充分说明了长假生活的丰富多彩，同时也体现了作者深厚的语言功底。
    结论段作者分别从正反两方面论述，指出只有精心安排长假，学生才能获益。全文观点明确，论述充分，有理有据。
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