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  3. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and It

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and It

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问题 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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答案This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 6 score. Here is the examiner’s comment: The answer addresses the task, reporting sufficient details for the reader to be accurately informed, even though in each chart one element is implied rather than overtly stated. Clear comparisons are drawn between the two countries. An overview is given, although focusing on only one age group reduces its clarity. The information is well organised and a range of linking devices used, e.g. whereas; the latter country. Vocabulary is adequate for the task and generally accurate, though attempts to use less common words are less successful. A few errors occur in word formation, e.g. statistic (statistical); estimative (estimate), but they do not affect understanding. Simple and complex sentence forms are produced with few grammatical errors, but the range of structures is rather restricted. [*]
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