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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Ambition by commenting on the saying, "In the hopes of r

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Ambition by commenting on the saying, "In the hopes of r

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Ambition by commenting on the saying, "In the hopes of reaching the moon men fail to see the flowers that blossom at their feet. " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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答案 On Ambition The saying "In the hopes of reaching the moon men fail to see the flowers that blossom at their feet." reveals the root of miseries of many people today. An unrealistic view on success prevails in the general public nowadays. Being ambitious, to some extent, is good for the progress of individuals and of the society as a whole. However, one must establish his goal based on his competence and talents, and it would be foolish of him to push himself too hard to reach the moon. In addition, one must have a correct view on success. Firstly, being ordinary does not necessarily mean being unsuccessful. Secondly, the results matter little compared with what the experience awards you in your pursuit of ambition. Even if you cannot reach the moon eventually, just think about how many times you have been surrounded by fragrant blossoms on the journey. To sum up, one must be rational when it comes to goal setting and experience itself is more valuable than the results.
解析     这是一篇议论文，主要讨论的是关于目标的问题。
    第一段提出文章讨论的主题：人们总是想要到达月球，却忽略了他们脚下盛开的鲜花，造成了很多人的悲剧。
    第二段阐述了当下一种不切实际的成功观，把目标设得太高。虽然有雄心在某种程度上对个人和社会的发展都有益处，但是目标的设定要依据自身的能力和天赋，好高骛远是蠢材。树立正确的成功观，首先要明确平凡不代表不成功；其次，跟追求目标的过程中所获得的宝贵经验相比，结果微不足道。即便最后到不了月球，也要记得旅途中见过的无数鲜花。此段从两方面分析，先指出一种错误的观点，再阐述树立正确观点的重要性，布局清晰，层次合理，结构明了。
    第三段总结全文，理性设定目标．经验比结果更有价值。
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