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  3. You are to write in no less 120 words on the topic of "What do you think of the Chinese Dream". You may base your composition on

You are to write in no less 120 words on the topic of "What do you think of the Chinese Dream". You may base your composition on

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问题 You are to write in no less 120 words on the topic of "What do you think of the Chinese Dream". You may base your composition on the Chinese clues given below and put your composition on the ANSWER SHEET.
新一届中央领导提出了“中国梦”的概念。
你心目中的“中国梦”是什么?
如何实现这个梦?
选项
答案 Chinese Dream is a new concept issued by the current central leadership of our country. In the broad sense, this concept can be described as national prosperity and rejuvenation, social harmony and people’s wealth. The Chinese people are greatly encouraged by this dream and each individual harbors a Chinese Dream of his own. I have my own Chinese Dream too. When people today are increasingly concerned over environmental pollution, I become equally worried about weather condition in our country. From last year, there have been reports about the widespread haze in many places of China. People have noticed the sustained mist-haze days in both rural and urban areas. And experts believe that haze is threatening people’s physical health. When we draw air into our lungs, we breathe haze as well. Haze is also believed to be responsible for the increasing lung diseases. Apart from this, haze will cause reduced visibility which contributes to more traffic accidents. Based on this, my Chinese Dream is that it will not be very long before our living environment can be well protected and the air will be fresh and clean so that we can have agreeable places to live in. To realize this dream, we need to make joint efforts. People’s awareness of environmental protection should be largely increased. Also, as Chinese Dream is a citizen-based dream, we can rely on the government to realize it. So I hope the regulation and supervision system will be established and intensified. With this, the blue skies are sure to come back.
解析     英语文章的标准是主题突出、观点明确、思想清楚、语言准确。这篇作文即符合了这些标准。作文的主题非常突出，全文围绕“中国梦”这一主题，既解释了其宏观含义，又阐述了其微观意义。
    文章主体部分紧紧围绕题目中的三个要点逐一展开。第一段简明扼要地概括了“中国梦"的概念，随后即巧妙地将写作重点转向个人心中的“中国梦”，为第二个要点的展开做了铺垫。内容简洁、明了，语言精练、准确，文章过渡自然、流畅。
    第二段主要谈“我”心中的“中国梦”。作者没有直接说明其“中国梦”是什么，而是围绕空气污染这一日益严重、全民关注的问题，提出雾霾对健康、环境、交通等的危害，继而笔锋一转，指出保护环境、治理雾霾即为自己的“中国梦”。
    第三段紧紧围绕第二段治理雾霾这一心目中的“中国梦”，将题目中的第三个要点简单、清楚地展开，干净、利索。
    整篇文章从内容、思想表达、篇章结构、语言使用等方面，基本符合英语文章的标准。
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