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  3. You are dissatisfied with the poor service that the advertisement company provided in making advertisement for your new product.

You are dissatisfied with the poor service that the advertisement company provided in making advertisement for your new product.

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问题 You are dissatisfied with the poor service that the advertisement company provided in making advertisement for your new product. Write a letter to the company:
- informing them of their service degradation
- explaining the reasons why you are dissatisfied
- describing the bad effect it has on your business
- suggesting the measures they can take to make compensations.
Write 200-250 words.
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答案Dear Manager, I am writing to complain about the unsatisfactory service of your company in making advertisement for our new product. Much to our dissatisfaction, you didn’t finish the designing work within fixed time and the commercial this time is slick without any innovation nor originality. And the background song used in the commercial doesn’t adjust to the subject. What’s more, the whole commercial is not well-organized with many people singing and dancing, as a result, the theme cannot stand out clearly. Most of the audiences watching that say that they don’t know what we want to convey with the advertisement and that they wouldn’t see it for a second time because it’s not attractive. That doesn’t measure up to our standards nor expectations. Because of all the above problems, we will have to put off a number of TV campaigns and that will cost us a lot of money and secondary benefits as we have arranged for a series of promotion activities for the new product. The sales of the new product will certainly be affected and other activities synchronized with the TV campaigns will have to be suspended. Therefore, I hope your company can revise the advertisement according to the specified details in a week so that we can reduce the loss to the minimum. Otherwise, we will have to take some legal actions to this event. Looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Jack Loughleed
解析     题目要求写一封投诉信。根据题目要求可知，这是一封投诉对方广告公司服务质量差的信函，要求首先通知对方其服务水平有所下降，然后解释自己为什么不满意，接下来描述对自己公司的不良影响。最后建议对方采取必要的补偿措施。写作时应注意书信的语气，因为是投诉信，措辞可以相对强硬，此外，应注意语句顺畅，上下文连贯，避免语法及拼写错误。
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