Below is a chart showing the distribution of traffic accidents in China from January to June in 1985. Look at the chart and writ

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问题    Below is a chart showing the distribution of traffic accidents in China from January to June in 1985. Look at the chart and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following points:
   1. Briefly state the traffic situation in China;
   2. Support your statement;
   3. Briefly discuss the possible solution.

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答案 Traffic Accidents in China Traffic accidents are becoming such a serious problem in China that more and more people involved in are injured or killed. As is shown in the above chart, from January to June in 1985, a total of 94,669 people were injured and 2,621 people were killed. Taking a closer look at the figures, we will find that the traffic accidents have been increasing all the time. In January, there are only 13,905 people injured, while in June the number went up to 17,151. As for those killed, there are only 230 in January, but in June there were 700. The rise in traffic accidents shows that they have already become a threat to people’s lives. It is urgent for the authorities to take effective measures and bring the traffic problem under control.

解析    此题要求考生对图表的相关数据和变化模式进行描述。第一段需要对图表的主要内容进行综述,第二段要求对图表中的数据变化进行分析,第三段分析问题的严重性并呼吁尽快采取有效的控制措施。另外需要抓住典型数据“from January to June in 1985,a total of 94,670 people were injured and 2,621 people were killed”,并重点描写变化趋势“we will find that traffic accidents have been increasing all the time”,而不能仅仅将图表中所有的数据都罗列照搬到文字上面。同时可以采用比较与对照的方法来比较和分析图表当中提供的各种数据和信息,找出它们之间的变化和区别,将形象化信息转化为文字信息。
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