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  3. The following chart shows the number and percentage of people over 60 in our country from 2013 to 2020. Look at the chart carefu

The following chart shows the number and percentage of people over 60 in our country from 2013 to 2020. Look at the chart carefu

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问题     The following chart shows the number and percentage of people over 60 in our country from 2013 to 2020. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart and give your comments.

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答案 Old Men and Society The chart above clearly demonstrates the changes in the number and the proportion of old people in our country. From 2013 to 2020, the number of people over 60 has kept increasing stably. We can see clearly from the chart that the number and the proportion of old people in our country rose considerably and stably during the eight years. There is no doubt that China will soon step into the aged society. For one thing, in the past decades, we have witnessed great development in China. The government invests more and more money in the social security of citizens and these policies effectively help people live longer. For another, with the improvement of living standards, people begin to pay more attention to their health than ever before. Books and TV programs about health care become very popular. The increasing awareness of personal health enables old people to enjoy a healthy and happy life. I believe that unavoidable problems would occur when we get into the aged society. It would be a challenging task for our country to adopt appropriate measures.
解析     本题为图表作文。从图表中可以看出，从2013年到2020年，我国60岁以上人口的数量和比重在不断上升。在具体行文方面，考生应首先概述图表内容；然后分析我国人口老龄化的原因；最后总结全文，提出自己的观点。
    开头部分描述图表内容，指出从2013年到2020年，60岁以上的老年人口数量保持稳定增长的态势。
    中间部分从两个方面分析我国人口老龄化的原因：一方面，在过去几十年，政府在公民社会保障方面投入了越来越多的资金，这些政策有效地帮助人们延长了寿命；另外，随着生活水平的提高，人们的健康意识增强了，生活更健康，寿命就更长了。
    结尾部分总结全文，指出步入老龄化社会将会产生不可避免的问题，国家应该采取适当的措施。
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