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  3. The following questions present a sentence, part of which or all of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence, you will find fiv

The following questions present a sentence, part of which or all of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence, you will find fiv

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问题 The following questions present a sentence, part of which or all of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence, you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.
   These questions test correctness and effectiveness of expression. In choosing your answer, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar, choice of words, and sentence construction. Choose the answer that produces the most effective sentence; this answer should be clear and exact, without awkwardness, ambiguity, redundancy, or grammatical error.
Blues musician Paul "Poboy" Smith, born in Tupelo, Mississippi, in 1936, has since 1958 been a fixture on the southern blues scene after the release of his debut album in that year.
选项 A、Blues musician Paul "Poboy" Smith, born in Tupelo, Mississippi, in 1936, has since 1958 been a fixture on the southern blues scene after the release of his debut album in that year.
B、Being born in 1936 in Tupelo, Mississippi, blues musician Paul "Poboy" Smith released his debut album in 1958 and has been a fixture on the southern blues scene since then.
C、Born in Tupelo, Mississippi, in 1936, blues musician Paul "Poboy" Smith has been a fixture on the southern blues scene since the release of his debut album in 1958.
D、Having been a texture on the southern blues scene since 1958 when he released his debut album, Paul "Poboy" Smith is a blues musician who was born in 1936 in Tupelo, Mississippi.
E、Since the release of his debut album in 1958, blues musician Paul "Poboy" Smith has been a fixture on the southern blues scene; he was born in Tupelo, Mississippi in 1936.
答案C
解析 A is flawed because it is unclear what "that year" refers to and because the combination of "since" and "after" is redundant. B presents a bizarre chronology by referring to Smith’s birth in 1936 in the present perfect "being born" and then using the simple past for a later event in 1958; also, the "has been a fixture.., since then" is awkward. D is somewhat redundant in identifying Smith as a "blues musician" after identifying him as a "fixture on the southern blues scene," and it presents the information in an illogical order by introducing Smith’s name so late in the sentence. E awkwardly separates the final clause from the rest of the sentence, so that there is really no reason why these should not be separate sentences. C is the most concise and idiomatic of the answer choices, and it presents the information in the most logical way.
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