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Man-made beauty is a new word that have appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by variou

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问题     Man-made beauty is a new word that have appeared in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How do you comment on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    My View on Man-made Beauty
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 My View on Man-made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has its two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons. Firstly, one’s appearance is God’s blessing. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are also diagnosed with mammary gland disease. The more serious problem is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people to false judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. , which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty. Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, I am strongly against it and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in the long run.
解析     本题是一个自由发挥型题目，要求考生就社会上出现越来越多的人造美女这一现象陈述自己的观点。整容作为一个新兴产业，正在得到越来越多人的青睐，特别是年轻女性。这个话题可以从两个方面人手： 思路1：支持整容。 爱美之心人皆有之，整容无可厚非。更何况美丽自己，愉悦他人，既是礼貌的一部分，也是自我的一种体现。整容的产生和发展是医学进步的产物，也是当社会稳定、物质生活在很大程度上得到满足之后的精神层面的追求。 思路2：不支持整容。 整容是对美丽的误解。真正的美应该是内在美，来自于良好的自身修养，以及高尚的道德品质。过分注重外表会让人忽略对内在美的追求。整容也会带来许多直接的恶果，比如隆胸手术易使女性患乳腺癌等。
    范文主要采纳了思路2进行写作。
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