Suppose that your friend has just graduated from university and got a good job. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulat

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问题 Suppose that your friend has just graduated from university and got a good job. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate him. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead. Do not write the address.

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答案Dear Yan Yufei, I am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my congratulations to you for you have just graduated from Fudan University and got a job in Jinghu Company. After years of hard and creative study, you finally achieved your goal. Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition. Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you, as you have done your utmost to progress. On the other hand, for me, it is a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded. In short, I take pride in your present success. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations again. Wish you still further success. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei

解析 首段只有一句,表明写作目的——祝贺对方大学毕业并找到工作。第二段共五句。首句讲对方付出的艰辛和努力。第二句和第一句是因果关系,用了连词therefore,表明喜悦之情可以理解。第三句评价对方的成功是应得的。第四句表明自己深受激励。第五句总结自己以对方为荣。第三段共两句。首句请对方接受自己的衷心祝贺。第二句祝愿对方获得更大的成功,是祝贺信的经典结尾句型。
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