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  3. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening

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问题 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2016. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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答案The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female adults learning different evening courses at an adult training centre in 2016, and the pie chart provides details about the proportion of students by age groups. Based on the bar chart, language was the most popular subject among women, with twice as many females (40) as males (20) learning this course. This was true of drama, attended by 20 women and 10 men. Around 25 men chose painting, while 30 women studied the same subject By contrast, sculpture was the only subject where male learners outnumbered females (10 versus 5). According to the pie chart, the given courses were dominantly attended by people aged 50 or over, accounting for 42%. This was followed by 40-49s at around a quarter. The percentage for 30-39s and 20-29s was similar, representing 16% and 11% respectively. Learners under 20 constituted only 5%. Overall, more women than men attended the courses at the centre, and most of the participants were elderly people over 50 years old.
解析 题目属于组合图形，通常来说，组合图形每个图为一个段落。本文柱形图介绍某学习中心四个科目男女学员的人数对比，因为该柱形图没有出现时间的变化，所以大致可以按照学员数量从多到少来介绍。饼图说明了各年龄段学员的比例，也是按照比例从大到小的顺序来写。无论是柱形图还是饼图，在介绍过程中要适当地对比和类比数据，使表达更加清晰。注意题目所给的时间为2016年，所以时态要用一般过去时。
按照以上思路，文章结构安排如下：
   1．开头段：改写题目。
   2．介绍柱形图，由于数据较少，可以一一列出。
   3．介绍饼图：按从大到小的顺序介绍。
   4．结论段，总结文章的主要特征：该中心在所给的四个科目中女性学员多于男性学员，而且多数学员年龄在50岁或以上。
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