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  3. Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Slow Life You

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Slow Life You

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问题     Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                            Slow Life
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 Slow Life It is the fastest of time in terms of transportation: it is the slowest of time when in terms of people’s patience. They are always on the run: they are never slowing down. The present period is one of the greatest paradoxes, in which people are constantly in a hurry, trying to save all the time they can in order to do more things, rather than enjoy life. What should be made known is that modern people are taken over by the"faster mania" , seeking for the quickest solution for whatever they do, and whatever people want. They want it all and want it now. That is to say, people have no patience to read every word of the classics, linger over every note of the music or enjoy every subtle change of the colors the world has to offer. Modern people struggle to survive, but forgets to live a life. In all the craze for speed, more and more people feel lost, stressed or even desperate. To find the inner peace, and to live a life, it is of great essence to nourish the heart rather than the head, with the fragrances of the spring flowers, the flavors of the autumn harvests, the heat of the summer sunshine, and the coolness of the white winter snow, and then one will truly feel a year, and gradually, fully lives a life. Life consists in moments that have taken your breath away, rather than the number of your breaths taken. Remember to slow down once in a while and enjoy the sceneries more along the season and the journey of life.
解析     这是一篇论述慢生活的话题型作文。根据作文题目可知，对慢生活的解读以及为什么需要慢下来是全文的主旨。首段提出现代人的悖论，永远都在挤时间、省时间、赶时间，但都忘记了享受生活。第二段是就自己的观点展开论述，指出现代人被一种凡事追求快的强迫症所控制，忙着生存而不是生活，结果进入了恶性循环的怪圈，导致终日忙乱而感到迷茫、不堪重负并陷入绝望。最后作者提出建议，要关注内心，欣赏四季之美、人生之美。第三段是结尾段，可以考虑以两种方式结束全文：第一种是对前面的论述进行简要概括，重申自己为什么有以上观点，做到首尾呼应；第二种可以就主旨进行引申，提出自己的建议。
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