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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about Should teenagers use the mobile phone? You should write at least 120 wo

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about Should teenagers use the mobile phone? You should write at least 120 wo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about Should teenagers use the mobile phone? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人认为家长应为青少年买手机
2. 有些人认为使用手机影响青少年学习
3. 我认为……
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答案 Nowadays, mobile phones have become part of(l) people’s life. Many teenagers are also equipped with this device(2) as their parents think the mobile phone can help them contact their children when necessary(3). Although it will usually costs about 1000 Yuan or even more, parents think it is worthwhile to buy one for their children. But as to this trend(4), there is also a lot of concern(5). Recently, teachers have been finding their students use the mobile phone to send messages in class, which will undoubtedly affect their study.. Even worse, the mobile phone has become a tool to show off: young students constantly ask their parents to buy new ones so that they can keep up with the latest fashion(6) or they can compete against other students’ new models. This will not only add the burden of the parents, but also harm the sound(7) psychological development of the young (8). Personally speaking(9), I don’t think parents should buy such an expensive thing for their children because it does more harm than good(10) to the teenagers. Now it is time for us to create a mobile phone clean environment on campus: it will not only do good to the young people but also to the parents.
解析     本文属观点型文章。考生须掌握表达观点的段落结构及常用句子结构。除了注意段落间的衔接外，句子问的衔接也对写作成败甚为重要。英文表达忌重复，范文十体现了这一点。考生在平时学习中，也应留心英文中同一说法的不同表达，这对写好作文也很有帮助。这类作文与社会现象紧密结合。因此，考生除了严时学习课本的基础知识外，还应阅读报纸等时讯类文章，以提高表达能力。
    1．be part of意为“是……的一部分”，如：The Internet has become part of life of the young people．
    2．用this device指代mobile phone，以避免重复。
    3．…when necessary为省略结构，意为“必要的时候”。
    4．but引出相反观点，使两段之间过渡自然。trend用以指代前面提到的家长为孩子买手机的情况。
    5．concern表示“忧虑，担心”。There is a lot of concern,表示“人们对这种现象比较担心”，即持否定意见。这种表达避免千篇—律地使用：different people have different opinion．或者Many people hold a negative opinion．这种表达，以使写作有新鲜感。
    6．keep up with意为“跟上”；latest意为“最新的”。考生应注意在考场上使用对其用法、拼写等确定的词语。若对某词不确定，应避免使用，以免错误太多。
    7．sound在此处意为“健康的，踏实的”。
    8．the young意为“年轻人”，此处是对teenager的另一种说法。
    9．personally speaking意为“就个人观点而言”，还可用in my opinion来表达。
    10．do more harm than good为固定表达，意为“弊大于利”。
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