Directions: Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the chart, and 2) give your c

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问题 Directions:
    Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) describe the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.

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答案 The pie chart illustrates the actual personal time management made by the respondents. As can be seen, 51% of the time is spent at work and 31% in sleeping. The remaining time is shared by eating, family, housework and relaxing, each of which takes up equally 4%, and exercise, which only accounts for 2%. It is a bit frustrating to see that a large amount of time is spent at work and relatively less time in life. The results implicitly allude to the stress experienced by the respondents. As far as I can see, it is necessary for us to nurture a culture of diversified interpretation of success. Success is not singularly contingent upon the achievement you make at work. Instead, a happy family, a self-content attitude and a healthy body are all important elements of a successful life. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." Therefore, we’d better ease ourselves a bit and embrace the vibrancy of life.

解析 该图表显示了受访者的时间管理的实际分布情况。从图表可见,受访者的较多时间是用于工作和睡觉。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表。
第二段提出个人看法:受访者太注重工作,不太注重生活。并建议我们营造良好的环境。允许对成功有不同解读,不要只限于事业上的成功。
第三段总结全文。
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